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Cat in George

  • Cat in George   2 years 11 months ago
     
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    Great summary, thanks.

    When I set up the system for the section titles, I thought about a lot of variations, including something like this. Problem is, I can't for the life of me decide which who should be fGeorge and who mGeorge?

    Is this the body whose driver license says "George", with either the original soul in it (mGeorge) or the swapped one (fGeorge)? Or is it the soul born as George, in either the original body (mGeorge) or the swapped one (fGeorge)?

    Or maybe I'm just horribly overthinking it...

George in Cat | Jones Tower, 8 P.M.

Cat in George | Jones Tower, 8 P.M.

Cat in George | Nosker House

Cat in George | The Oval, walking back to Dreese

  • Cat in George | The Oval, walking back to Dreese   2 years 11 months ago
     
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    I've made a little more of the thinking explicit. I hope that anchors the conversation better.

    @LL, "best line": I will confess to a lingering smile after that line found me and said it wanted into the conversation.

George in Cat | Dreese Lab, lunch time

  • George in Cat | Dreese Lab, lunch time   2 years 11 months ago
     
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    Yes, that's another Consistorium member. They can see the sigil. So even if this person hasn't seen GiC, they would still know Diana isn't her, because Diana doesn't have the sigil. Also, the school warned about a soul-swapped person being around and then Mark starts dating her. Rumors being what they are, I'm sure that one made the rounds in a hurry. Unfortunately, the facts involved are in the previous Thursday chapter, so many a moon ago in posting date. :(

    Bolded about scratched -- that was an incomplete edit. Also, added some words to make explicit that Diana is asking about Cat in her current, swapped state.
  • George in Cat | Dreese Lab, lunch time   2 years 11 months ago
     
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    Sighs and adds 'to'. If anything in the world is clear, it is that it's a good thing I didn't become a particle physicist...
    I've removed the leading "Him" from the other sentence.

    With Diana's adjustment, in a sense, you've spotted a future plot element.

George in Cat | Dreese Lab

Cat in George | Dreese Lab

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