Cat in George
Dreese Lab, 9 PM

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Leans forward when I describe Sunday and says, “Aha!” when I get to the dream Sunday night.

This is sentence fragment. I know the subject is Lena but you should probably either connect it to the previous sentence or add "She" to this one.
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I think my comment about the smex was a little too soon.